Mercy's Prince

Mercy’s Prince by Katy Huty

The Story:
Valerian never aspired to be anything more than the younger brother of a crown prince. But when tragedy strikes, Valerian finds himself forced into shoes he doesn’t know that he can fill.
Mercy knows of no other life except that of the peaceful Brethren. When disaster strikes their village she must find a way to prevail against evil, while still holding fast to her beliefs.

The Characters:
More than any one trait shown by the two main characters, the growth and development of Valerian and Merry demonstrate this Author’s skill. We come across two young people from very different backgrounds, both finding their way; discovering who they are, and what they deem important, as the world threatens to crumble beneath their feet. Minor disparities in some of Mercy’s reactions did not detract from both teens being lovable and well-rounded. They displayed humor, grief, empathy, humility, triumph, and pride. Valerian and Mercy are great role models for younger readers.
The minor characters are tangible and well presented. Each with a reason for being in the story. Each of them memorable.

The World:
The picture of a fantasy, medieval world set in the highlands of Scotland is strongly painted for the reader. A central keep with garrison outposts and villages spread throughout the kingdom. The Author has clearly carried out a great deal of research on this era; on the manner of speech, of etiquette, of clothing, of labor, and of day-to-day objects to give authenticity to her novel. The world is just as interesting as the plot.
It is initially difficult to accept the presence of Lizard-like creatures in an otherwise usual epic fantasy world, however as the novel unfolds belief in the horde creatures grows. Magical elements in this book are explained in a simple way, excellent for young audiences. Especially likable is the mind connection between the main protagonists, the seer ability, and the small dragons...I want a Sir Edmund of my own.

The Readability:
The pace of Mercy’s Prince is impeccable. With frequent point of view changes between Valerian, Mercy, and the main Antagonist. The world and characters are depicted concisely, but vividly. It is rare to read an epic fantasy that requires so little effort to read. The plot is pleasantly hard to predict, and our expectations of the story are fulfilled.
In two instances there is pronoun confusion mid-scene, but overall the craft displayed by Katy Huty is professional. It is clear from the excellent flow that the work has been meticulously edited.
The language and content is suitable for audiences of 13 years and older.

Final Verdict:
A classic coming-of-age story of the journey from adolescent to hero. Strong morals, a sweet love story, and oodles of action; with a magical twist.

Favorite Quote:
“That sounds like what I’m doing already, holding on because my life depends on it.”