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Reader reviewed by Babydex17

I give this a three, because I feel that somehow it could have been better.

I'm gonna start of with Cho Chang. That girl has problems and they need to be looked at. the way she was crying about Cedric implied that they might have done something together. I kinda thought she might have been pregnant for him, because come on, only a chick who might have had or was going to have his kid would carry on like that.

And the there was Umpbridge (I think that's how you spell it). She obviously had something big against Harry to do the things she did and I think she might have had a thing for Snape.

Then there's Snape. Yea, if I was him I would hate James Potter too for what he did. Harry's kinda of stupid so his dislike for Harry is justifiable.

With Ron and Hermione, you can tell there's something going on between them, but you can't tell if she like Ron or Victor or Harry. She's confusng. And then you kind of wonder if Ron likes her at all.

Now You could tell Sirius was kinda suicidal, it wasn't that hard to figure out. And if you didn't notice it at first, when someone mentions it to you, your like "oh, yea he was". That's kinda mean that he left Remus all alone now. I'm starting to wonder if she'll kill off Remus too. I'm starting to wonder if Sirius is really dead. That veil is very suspicious, you don't really know what's behind there.

Why exactly is Voldemort afraid of Dumbledore? I think there's something going on there, but Dumbledore isn't saying anything. I kinda think Dumbledore is a bit out there.

Harry thinks that everything that goes on is about him. And if he wasn't so nosy, Sirius might still be alive. Harry has bad luck whe it comes to girls, hopefully he'll get with some new girl.

Last but not least, I think Ginny shoud get with Draco. That would just be cool. It would be a total act of defiance on oth sides.