Review Detail

What worked:
Sparrow, real name Ruyan, is an unassuming, humble student, trying to learn about magic before it’s lost. All children in this setting possess magic while knowing they’ll lose it as adults. Her older brother Ainsley is a third-year student, but he’s recognized for his powerful fire magic. In contrast, the fire Sparrow summons is barely larger than the flame on a match, and she feels inadequate when compared to other students, especially her brother. However, she sees a vision while being tested for her magical ability, and she’s told that’s usually an indicator of strong power. The head healer examines her and says something is blocking Sparrow’s ability to access her power. This tells readers that there’s more to her character than they currently see, and they’ll await the moment her powers awaken.
Sparrow becomes obsessed with finding out the cause of magedrain, which is causing students to lose their magic. She thinks it’s not natural reasons and suspects that someone is poisoning their classmates. Sparrow quickly identifies a suspect, but readers will question if she’s right. The suspect seems too obvious, and Sparrow makes all of her observations and “evidence” fit this person. The illness is attacking students with the strongest magic, so Sparrow fears her brother may be one of the next victims. Her friend wonders if Sparrow is more concerned about finding the guilty party or proving her brother wrong. Good question.
The school’s purpose is to strengthen students’ magic, and it’s interesting to see the variety of mages. Besides Sparrow’s fire, her best friends Lyndon and Orla possess air and nature magic, respectively. All of the students want stronger powers, although Lyndon has a special interest in magecraft, the art of engineering magic. The school includes a first-year bully who goes out of her way to heckle and tease Sparrow. Sparrow eventually has an unexpected reaction to the girl’s harassment, but it’s important to the story.
What didn’t work as well:
It would be nice to know more about a few of the supporting characters. Ainsley is a conflicted mage, but readers are only shown his arrogant side. Camellia taunts Sparrow throughout much of the story, but behaves differently later on. Readers don’t really know exactly what changed to cause this new version of herself.
The final verdict:
The book has many of the same traits as other stories about schools for magic students, although it’s unusual that none of the teachers can perform it. The plot focuses on the mystery of magedrain and Sparrow’s drive to prove herself, culminating in a surprising revelation that will continue into the sequel. I recommend you try this book for yourself.