The Traitor Moth

What worked:
How many books have you read that feature moths? Catclaw is the main character, and he belongs to the Nameless clan. Dreamkins used to have the ability to see premonitions of the future until the queen of all moths took that power away. Their clan is now known as Nameless. Most moths live around twelve moon turns, which readers will assume means twelve months. The moths find refuge in trees, tall grasses, and other vegetation, and it’s dangerous for them to fly during daylight hours. Bats and toads are common, natural enemies for moths, but Bluewings are mutant wasps that nearly wiped them all out. Catclaw fears the Bluewings are now returning.
The main conflict finds Catclaw on a quest to speak with the moth queen. He has a premonition of Bluewing attacks, and it’s believed the queen once repelled them by using her voice. However, the Nameless don’t believe Catclaw had a vision, so it’s unlikely other clans will listen to him. The queen rarely agrees to see visitors, and Catclaw must collect tokens from the other clans before he can even hope to approach her. The Nameless haven’t had contact with the other clans for years, and Catclaw discovers the situation is much worse than he expects. The other clans aren’t communicating with each other anymore, so how is he supposed to collect the tokens he needs? A huge surprise awaits once he finally reaches the queen’s fortress, and the book’s title makes sense.
The author includes some mystique to accent its speculative fiction. The Nameless Master dies, but first, he gives Catclaw his diary. Catclaw carries it with him during his adventure, but he realizes the book provides guidance. He thinks or speaks questions, and the book displays cryptic answers. However, the last page also states Catclaw Traitor. Catclaw has premonitions of future events, so readers are given hints of what’s to come. In contrast, italicized paragraphs relate to stories Master Saturna told Catclaw in the past and provide information about current happenings. Catclaw also senses someone is watching him during his journey, but he’s never able to spot anyone.
What didn’t work as well:
Even though all kinds of creatures can be found in speculative fiction books, some readers may still have trouble wrapping their minds around moths. Some of the descriptions and movements are hard to visualize when readers consider the characters are moths.
The final verdict:
The title and moth characters may confuse young readers, but the plot contains everything they’ll want. Catclaw is an admirable character as he’s trustworthy and determined to save the clan that shunned him. Overall, I recommend adventure lovers check out this book.