Alice with a Why

What worked:
The story requires mental engagement and may remind readers of The Phantom Tollbooth. Numerous examples of wordplay fill the story as Alyce is introduced to the characters of Wonderland. Readers’ first taste of puzzlement happens when she falls into a tea party. “… Alyce with a Y.” “A why?... Do you have where or who?” There is a definite breakdown in communication, as Alyce tries to explain that she’s not the Alice who visited before. The narrator helps to form connections with the text by speaking directly to readers. These connections might, or might not, help with understanding the language and story. However, readers are often left on their own.
The major difference from Alice in Wonderland is the introduction of two conflicting characters. The Sun King and Queen of the Moon are fighting over a stolen hour, which results in sudden changes between daylight and nighttime. Characters don’t know when to sleep, because sunshine may return at any moment. Alyce is forced into the role of peacekeeper even though she struggles to navigate this strange world. She’s joined by Fox for much of her adventure, and he helps by offering moral support and suggestions. They’re told to find the Time Being, as he might have ideas for resolving the conflict.
Middle-graders who’ve read or seen the movie of Alice in Wonderland will recognize many of the characters. The Mad Hatter, Dormouse, and the Hare greet Alyce at a tea party. The Cheshire Cat offers her confusing directions. The smoking Caterpillar is busy eating pages of poetry, but he still provides Alyce with suggestions. The Three Men in a Tub help Alyce and Fox sail across water, and White Rabbit makes a brief appearance, telling Alyce she’s late.
What didn’t work as well:
Young readers might tire of the wordplay, as it’s never-ending. The playful language contributes humor, but it also creates confusion. The climax is anti-climactic, as the suspense never builds to a dramatic, defining moment. Alyce’s quest to find the Time Being doesn’t turn out as expected.
The final verdict:
Although it’s not necessary, it will be helpful if readers are familiar with Alice in Wonderland. They’ll miss the many references to the original story with that knowledge. The fairy tale format is universally engaging, and I suggest you try it out.